First episode of a new Insurgence series, looking for honest feedback!

Hey guys!

So TL;DR: last year I started a series on insurgence, did some epsiodes, had issues, had to stop this and playing in general for a year. So if anyone here actually remembers this channel from the week or so I posted daily on the subreddit, hey!

But anyway, I started a new series since I forgot everything about the game, and I was hoping you guys could offer me some honest feedback! Here’s the first episode:

Things to note:

  1. How’s the layout? Is it intrusive? Is it good?
  2. Can you guys offer your opinion on the thumbnail as well? Trying out a new style!
  3. I know I say “uhm…” and “anyway” a lot, it’s due to me not being a native speaker and thus having to think a lot before I say something. I’m doing this LP to practice my english, so I’m hoping this will get better over time.
  4. I skipped the intro because I know all my views will come from here, and I’m pretty sure you all already saw this stuff plenty of times.
  5. You can send me feedback anywhere really. Be it through PM here, on youtube, on youtube comments, on reddit (my username is Prismer there too), as a reply to this thread… I check everything!

Thank you again for giving this video a chance, and just to reiterate, any feedback is welcome! Be it harsh or gentle, all I ask is for fairness and an honest opinion on what needs to improve.