Right… So let’s cut right to the chase.
I made Zigzagoon based on Ninjas (Very original yes) I know for a fact it’s very bad so criticism is much appreciated.
Zigzagoon: (Type: Pure Dark)
Linoone: (Type: Dark [and possibly steel?])
Thank you for your time and write your criticisms below!
(TY @sphealigon-XIV for the updated Linoone Sprite!)
Also, I didn’t make a larger version yet as it is still WIP.
Thank you.
I have the feeling Zigzagoons face has dissappeared. Only the white eyes give some resemblance of there being his face. I think you need to change it up much more.
They spike thing on Linoones back is supposed to be a sword/dagger of some kind? If you are really going for that, you should really change it up by letting Linoone stand on 2 feet an make him a real ninja.
Only recolors and the addition of some scarfs and sharp nails isn’t enough to me. I like the idea you got at the moment, but it really needs work.
Hopefully this helps.
aight ty.
Lemme work on it.
its a cool idea, however, it is quite similar to the delta squirtle line
I know. That’s why I said it’s not the most original and also, Pokemon can have similar concepts and be original. Look at the first route birds.
I updated the Linoone Sprite (Not zigzagoon yet)but I couldn’t make it stand (it looks bad)
Here’s my updated thing.
This is getting a bit messy… You are giving him a belt and a Ninja-star Tail… not really what I should go for… A sprite does not need to get finished within 2 days, just work on it till you think it is good. A standing Linoone isn’t easy, but you may pull it off.
You could use Typhlosion’s sprite as a template for Linoone since their body type is very similar.I’d also advise you to research ninjas beyond the stereotypical look, but I think delta zigzagoon looks nice.